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Yesterday's DPP was a confessional post and you all took the idea and ran with it. There's some really interesting secrets and some discussions that delve quite deeply in to characterisation and produced some really interesting meta-ish thoughts. The discussion is still going on over there, and there were new confessions coming in quite late last night/early this morning, so if you have time today please do pop back to that post and join in with the discussions and start new ones. It's been absolutely fascinating reading them.

Today's DPP is Song Lyric Prompts Saturday. This is absolutely not the same thing as song fic but rather an opportunity to use a line from a song as a prompt for some fic.

Rules:

  • The prompts have to be a lyric from a song

  • It would be nice, but not necessary, if you could include the artist/title in case someone wants to go and look up the song in question

  • You don't have to include the lyric in your fic, just use it as a jumping off point, though you can include it if you feel it fits in

  • There is no limit to the length of the fic

  • The fics can be set in AU

  • If your fic ends up being R or NC-17 rated then please show that in the comment title



I've envisaged this as a sort of all weekend thing, so please do keep checking back :) I'll post a couple of prompts to get you going :)


Dancing to some beautiful music

Holiday in Spain, Counting Crows, NC-17

Date: 2011-08-21 01:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kdbleu.livejournal.com
Kara stumbles out of Joe’s, jostling between the wall and someone who pushes back just enough for all the tension and rotgut and heartbreak to come bubbling to the surface. Kara straightens up, fists ready to fly.

“Back off! You won,” Dee bites out. Kara’s hand hangs into the air confusion twisting her face, as Dee continues, “He’s all yours. You frakking deserve each other.” Then the other woman whips away and down the hall.

For a long moment, Kara stands aghast, but the alcohol and memories seep back. Catching eyes with Lee as he sat with Dualla. Drinking with Sam. Then sidling away as he chose barroom pyramid over his wife. She leans into the wall, slipping like the ground is dissolving beneath her.

Then a hand takes her arm. Too rough to be Sam. Too gentle to be help. But she can’t bear too look.

“Hey,” Lee whispers. “I thought about it. I left.”

It would be better if she was sober, but she’s pretty sure she wouldn’t have the guts to do it without the liquid courage coursing through her veins. The kiss is wet and sloppy, public and more than little obscene. He opens instantly to her, and Kara gasps into his mouth, “Want you now.”

“Come on then.”

Kara has no idea where they’re going to go. She follows though. They wind through the ship hand in hand as if Lee doesn’t care who sees. And he must not care because he pushes open the hatch to his quarters and pulls her inside. Dee’s things are still everywhere, but Lee’s laying her out on the bed, grinding against her hip and stripping her tanks and bra. He takes a nipple into his mouth and Kara quits caring.

Instead, she toes off her boots, begins tugging at the buttons of her pants. Lee shifts to play with her other nipple enabling her to finish wriggling out of her clothes. She shivers as his still covered erection finds her engorged clit. He rubs until she’s begging for relief. “Gods, Lee. Oh, gods. Get your frakking clothes off.”

He jumps up from the bed, salutes and strips. He’s beautiful aroused for her. She giggles as his cock bobs towards her wet heat. He crawls up her body kissing and murmuring until almost without warning he’s sliding inside her. He thrusts slowly at first building quickly until Kara can’t catch her breath and Lee’s groaning with every push.

A change in rhythm tells her that Lee’s close. She leans in and sucks that spot on his neck the one that drives him wild, and he’s chanting her name, “Kara. Kara. Kara.”

Then he snakes his between them, flips her clit like a switch. And it’s everything. Everything she’s been waiting for, wanting since they last spoke, since the dance, since before the dance. It’s dizzying the way her thoughts and orgasm twine together taking her to some other more perfect place.

“Want you always,” he breathes as they’re coming down. Kara curls into his arms. Home finally.


Edited Date: 2011-08-21 01:56 am (UTC)

Re: Holiday in Spain, Counting Crows, NC-17

Date: 2011-08-21 02:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scifishipper.livejournal.com
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

So much amazing imagery and emotion. I love your writing. It's just beautiful. This is scorching! Bravo!

Re: Holiday in Spain, Counting Crows, NC-17

Date: 2011-08-21 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kdbleu.livejournal.com
You found it!!!

Thank you. I'm glad it's to your liking. *giggles*

Re: Holiday in Spain, Counting Crows, NC-17

Date: 2011-08-21 02:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kdbleu.livejournal.com
thank you.

I like to believe that Lee knows just where to touch and tease Kara too, but Kara would revel a little more in that kind of power. ;)

Re: Holiday in Spain, Counting Crows, NC-17

Date: 2011-08-22 12:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] word-vomity.livejournal.com
'Too rough to be Sam. Too gentle to be help.'

I don't know why that line hits me like a ton of bricks, but it does. Love it! Especially the dirty parts! ;)

Excellent use of the prompt as well.

Re: Holiday in Spain, Counting Crows, NC-17

Date: 2011-08-22 02:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kdbleu.livejournal.com
I really like that line too. Thanks you.

And sexing pilots are always good. :D

Gravity, Sara Bareilles

Date: 2011-08-20 02:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callmeonetrack.livejournal.com
Something always brings me back to you.
It never takes too long.
No matter what I say or do I'll still feel you here 'til the moment I'm gone.

You hold me without touch.
You keep me without chains.
I never wanted anything so much than to drown in your love and not feel your rain.

Perhaps, Doris Day

Date: 2011-08-20 02:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rachelindeed.livejournal.com
You won't admit you love me, and so
how am I ever to know?
You only tell me: perhaps, perhaps, perhaps.

If you can't make your mind up
we'll never get started.
And I don't wanna wind up
being parted, broken-hearted.

So if you really love me, say yes.
But if you don't, dear, confess.
And please don't tell me: perhaps, perhaps, perhaps.

Forever Young, Bob Dylan

Date: 2011-08-20 02:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rirenec.livejournal.com
May your hands always be busy,
May your feet always be swift,
May you have a strong foundation
When the winds of changes shift.
May your heart always be joyful,
May your song always be sung,
And may you stay,
Forever young.

In My Head, Anna Nalick

Date: 2011-08-20 02:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rachelindeed.livejournal.com
Fall awake to the sound of my heart to your beat,
melancholy and cool, kinda bittersweet.
Love on repeat, I'm echoing all your philosophies.

...But we can't jump the track, we're like cars on a cable,
and life's like an hourglass, glued to the table.

Re: In My Head, Anna Nalick

Date: 2011-08-20 03:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callmeonetrack.livejournal.com
<3 Anna Nalick

I so want a second CD.

Re: In My Head, Anna Nalick

Date: 2011-08-20 03:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rachelindeed.livejournal.com
You introduced me to her, actually, with "Shine!" I loved that vid so much. <3 <3 <3

Re: In My Head, Anna Nalick

Date: 2011-08-20 04:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callmeonetrack.livejournal.com
Aw yay! That was my very first song that just screamed pilots so much I had to vid it!

Everything, Alanis Morissette

Date: 2011-08-20 03:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rachelindeed.livejournal.com
I can be an asshole of the grandest kind
I can withhold like it's going out of style
I can be the moodiest baby and you've never met anyone
As negative as I am sometimes

I'm the wisest woman you've ever met
I'm the kindest soul with whom you've connected
I have the bravest heart that you've ever seen
And you've never met anyone
As positive as I am sometimes.

Re: Everything, Alanis Morissette

Date: 2011-08-21 03:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] damao2010.livejournal.com
Great choice. :)

Re: Everything, Alanis Morissette

Date: 2011-08-21 10:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anamarya.livejournal.com
this is perfect

Answer, Sarah Mclachlan

Date: 2011-08-20 03:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rirenec.livejournal.com
I will be the answer
At the end of the line
I will be there for you
While you take the time
In the burning of uncertainty
I will be your solid ground
I will hold the balance
If you can't look down

Eras tu, Merche.

Date: 2011-08-20 03:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anamarya.livejournal.com
i know that this an English comm and all but i;m in sort of a hurry and i couldn't find the English version of this at the moment. but this is the perfect song for them. i sort of cut a couple of the lyrics because it was a little to long.

Pienso que sabia que era su ultimo viaje
Cuántas despedidas por si no podía volver
No le falto ningún amigo, todos quisieron ser testigos

Recordando chistes como siempre te reías
No imaginamos que ya nunca volverías
Te nombramos tantas veces que te noto aquí
Dándome tu energía y regalando tu sonrisa

Eras tu quien me dio mas abrazos en los malos momentos
Quien guardaba mis grandes secretos
Y disfrutaba con solo ver me feliz

Re: Eras tu, Merche.

Date: 2011-08-20 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shah-of-blah.livejournal.com
That's beautiful!

Re: Eras tu, Merche.

Date: 2011-08-21 02:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] damao2010.livejournal.com
Nice. Since we're going Spanish, what about this one.
Limon y sal, Julieta Venegas
Tengo que confesar que a veces
no me gusta tu forma de ser
luego te me desapareces y no entiendo muy bien por qué
no dices nada romántico cuando llega el atardecer
te pones de un humor extraño con cada luna llena al mes.

Pero a a todo lo demás le gana lo bueno que me das
sólo tenerte cerca siento que vuelvo a empezar.

CORO:
Yo te quiero con limón y sal, yo te quiero tal y como estás,
no hace falta cambiarte nada,
yo te quiero si vienes o si vas,
si subes y bajas y
no estás seguro de lo que sientes.

Tengo que confesarte ahora
nunca creí en la felicidad
a veces algo se le parece, pero
es pura casualidad.

Luego me vengo a encontrar con tus ojos y me dan algo más
solo tenerte cerca siento
que vuelvo a empezar.

Re: Eras tu, Merche.

Date: 2011-08-21 09:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anamarya.livejournal.com
nice. i like these lyrics. especially the last three lines.

Three Days Grace - Gone Forever

Date: 2011-08-20 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Don't know what's going on
Don't know what went wrong
Feels like a hundred years I
Still can't believe you're gone
So I'll stay up all night
With these bloodshot eyes
While these walls surround me
With the story of our life

I feel so much better
Now that you're gone forever
I tell myself that I don't miss you at all
I'm not lying
Denying that I feel so much better now
That you're gone forever

Now things are coming clear
And I don't need you here
And in this world around me
I'm glad you disappeared
So I'll stay out all night
Get drunk and fuck and fight
Until the morning comes I'll
Forget about our life

Always thought the song fitting for Kara's struggle with Lee's rejection after TAB

Muse - Resistance

Date: 2011-08-20 06:51 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Is our secret safe tonight? And are we out of sight
Or will our world come tumbling down?
Will they find our hiding place? Is this our last embrace
Or will the walls start caving in?

It could be wrong, could be wrong
But it should've been right
It could be wrong, could be wrong
To let our hearts ignite

It could be wrong, could be wrong
Are we digging a hole?
It could be wrong, could be wrong
This is out of control

For pilots tempestuous affair on the Algae Planet

Daughtry - Over You

Date: 2011-08-20 06:55 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Now that it's all said and done
I can't believe you were the one
To build me up and tear me down
Like an old abandoned house
And what you said when you left
Just left me cold and out of breath
I fell too far, was in way too deep
Guess I let you get the best of me

Well I never saw it coming
I should've started running
A long long time ago
And I never thought to doubt you
I'm better off without you
More than you, more than you know
I'm slowly getting closure
I guess it's really over
I'm finally getting better
And now I'm picking up the pieces
And spending all of these years
Putting my heart back together
'Cause the day I thought I'd never get through
I got over you

Lee telling himself that he is through with Kara after she married Sam

Roads, Portishead (for Kara)

Date: 2011-08-20 07:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] winegums.livejournal.com
Esp. during Unfinished Business morning after/EoJ/Rapture/Maelstrom. Full song here (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zSuOrA7q6kw).
_____________
Oh, can't anybody see,
We've got a war to fight,
Never found our way,
Regardless of what they say.

How can it feel, this wrong,
From this moment,
How can it feel, this wrong.

Storm in the morning light,
I feel,no more can I say,
Frozen to myself.

I got nobody on my side,
And surely that ain't right,
Surely that ain't right
_____________________

This was one of my favourite songs long before I discovered pilots, so it spooks me a little just how well the lyrics fit.

Three Days Grace - Gone Forever

Date: 2011-08-20 07:54 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Don't know what's going on
Don't know what went wrong
Feels like a hundred years I
Still can't believe you're gone
So I'll stay up all night
With these bloodshot eyes
While these walls surround me
With the story of our life

I feel so much better
Now that you're gone forever
I tell myself that I don't miss you at all
I'm not lying
Denying that I feel so much better now
That you're gone forever

Now things are coming clear
And I don't need you here
And in this world around me
I'm glad you disappeared
So I'll stay out all night
Get drunk and fuck and fight
Until the morning comes I'll
Forget about our life

Kara dealing with Lee's rejection in TAB

Slide Away, Oasis

Date: 2011-08-20 08:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] winegums.livejournal.com
For pilots' night together on New Caprica, or how I imagine Lee might have felt between finally upsetting the applecart and waking up. Full Song here (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1ei6YQchGZg).
________________

Now that you're mine
We'll find a way
Of chasing the sun
Let me be the one who shines with you
In the morning we don't know what to do
Two of a kind
We'll find a way
To do what we've done

Let me be the one who shines with you
And we can slide away.
From: [identity profile] winegums.livejournal.com
so much hate for the ones we love

Anytime between LDYBII and UB.

The Glitch Mob feat. Swan - Between Two Points

Date: 2011-08-21 01:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] apollosspear.livejournal.com
this song is sexy as hell, and for me, feels exactly like the chemistry is between Kara and Lee.

we've got forever
slippin through our hands
we've got more time
to never understand

falling footsteps
weighing heavy on me

behind darkness
beneath candles
whispers waltz
around our dreams

the shortest distance
between two points
is the line
from me to you

feet turning black
is this the path we must walk
no turning back
wish i could just hear you talk

can something like this be pulled
from under our feet
leaving our skin
and burning coals to meet

tell me now

Somewhere(A Place for Us)

Date: 2011-08-21 02:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] damao2010.livejournal.com
There's a place for us,
Somewhere a place for us.
Peace and quiet and open air
Wait for us
Somewhere.

There's a time for us,
Some day a time for us,
Time together with time to spare,
Time to look, time to care,
Someday!
Somewhere.
We'll find a new way of living,
We'll find a way of forgiving
Somewhere.

There's a place for us,
A time and place for us.
Hold my hand and we're half way there.
Hold my hand and I'll take you there
Somehow,
Someday,
Somewhere!

Staind-- Right Here

Date: 2011-08-21 04:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kl-shipper1.livejournal.com
I know I've been mistaken
But just give me a break and see the changes that I've made
I've got some imperfections
But how can you collect them all and throw them in my face?

But you always find a way to keep me right here waiting
You always find the words to say to keep me right here waiting
And if you chose to walk away, I'd still be right here waiting
Searching for the things to say to keep you right here waiting

I hope you're not intending
To be so condescending
It's as much as I can take
And you're so independent
You just refuse to bend, so I keep bending till I break

But you always find a way to keep me right here waiting
You always find the words to say to keep me right here waiting
And if you chose to walk away I'd still be right here waiting
Searching for the things to say to keep you right here waiting

I've made a commitment
I'm willing to bleed for you
I needed fulfillment
I found what I need in you

Why can't you just forgive me
I don't want to relive all the mistakes I've made along the way
But I always find a way to keep you right here waiting
I always find the words to say to keep you right here waiting

But you always find a way
To keep me right here waiting
You always find the words to say to keep me right here waiting
And if I chose to walk away, would you be right here waiting?
Searching for the things to say to keep me right here waiting

John Mayer-- Heartbreak Warfare

Date: 2011-08-21 04:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kl-shipper1.livejournal.com
Lightning strike
Inside my chest to keep me up at night
Dream of ways
To make you understand my pain

Clouds of sulfur in the air
Bombs are falling everywhere
It's heartbreak warfare
Once you want it to begin,
No one really every wins
In heartbreak warfare

If you want more love,
Why don't you say so?
If you want more love,
Why don't you say so?

Drop his name
Push it in and twist the knife again
Watch my face
As I pretend to feel no pain

Clouds of sulfur in the air
Bombs are falling everywhere
It's heartbreak warfare
Once you want it to begin,
No one really ever wins
In heartbreak warfare.

If you want more love,
why don't you say so?
If you want more love,
why don't you say so?

Just say so ...

How come the only way to know how high you get me
Is to see how far I fall?
God only knows how much I'd love you if you let me
But I can't break through it all

It's heartbreak... heartbreak

I don't care if we don't sleep at all tonight
Let's just fix this whole thing now
I swear to God we're gonna get it right
If you lay your weapon down

Red wine and Ambien, you're talking shit again
It's heartbreak warfare
Good to know it's all a game
Disappointment has a name, it's heartbreak... heartbreak.

It's heartbreak warfare
It's heartbreak warfare
It's heartbreak warfare

Christina Aguilera-- Hurt

Date: 2011-08-21 04:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kl-shipper1.livejournal.com
...

I would hold you in my arms, I would take the pain away
Thank you for all you've done, forgive all your mistakes
There's nothing I wouldn't do to hear your voice again
Sometimes I wanna call you but I know you won't be there

Oh, I'm sorry for blaming you
For everything I just couldn't do
And I've hurt myself by hurting you

Some days I feel broke inside but I won't admit
Sometimes I just wanna hide 'cause it's you I miss
And it's so hard to say goodbye when it comes to this, ooh

...

Oh, I'm sorry for blaming you
For everything I just couldn't do
And I've hurt myself, oh

If I had just one more day
I would tell you how much that I've missed you
Since you've been away


Date: 2011-09-27 08:49 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Great post. Can’t wait to read the next ones :)

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