DPP: Pilot Haiku
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no_takebacksGreetings and salutations, Shipper Nation! I'm Amy, your friendly neighborhood monkey ninja.
Haiku- simple, elegant, and yet a rigid form. Wikipedia gives way more detail than I intend to. You should know the basic drill- 3 lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables. Your obvious theme is Kara and/or Lee. 1, 2, 3, GO!
Example:
Adrift in the black
Air escaping in a rush
He lets himself go
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Date: 2011-05-11 12:48 pm (UTC)Lips full and lush, desire sparks
Slowly curving smile
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Date: 2011-05-11 12:54 pm (UTC)Love it!
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Date: 2011-05-12 12:51 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-11 12:59 pm (UTC)Dirt and fresh air in his nose
Bright shiny future?
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Date: 2011-05-11 01:03 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-11 02:41 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-12 12:53 am (UTC)Ouch.
As Xander once said, "I'm going to listen to country music now. The music of pain."
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Date: 2011-05-11 01:02 pm (UTC)The blue-green planet below
Wait 'til Lee sees this
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Date: 2011-05-12 12:35 am (UTC)An Affair in 3 Acts
Date: 2011-05-11 02:04 pm (UTC)And besides, I think they would word as stand alones too, so it counts. Haha.
Her skin burns for him
His touch lingers from the night
As she says 'I Do.'
Fists hurt like kisses
Pain and love yelled in the night
Again, they see stars.
Secrets. Touches. Guilt.
Rings and ink speak things unsaid.
His skin burns for her.
Re: An Affair in 3 Acts
Date: 2011-05-11 02:17 pm (UTC)Re: An Affair in 3 Acts
Date: 2011-05-11 02:24 pm (UTC)Re: An Affair in 3 Acts
Date: 2011-05-12 12:37 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-11 02:26 pm (UTC)Trusting herself is
Always harder than trusting
Him. It’s a problem.
When the voices in
Your head tell you to die, say:
I’ve got other plans.
How have we gone this
Long without working things out?
I know, right? It’s weird.
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Date: 2011-05-11 04:22 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-11 04:32 pm (UTC)I make bad choices it's true
Not today. You're here
I lie here waiting
For you to stop me running
Away from our truth
More later. Love this topic!
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Date: 2011-05-12 12:49 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-11 04:34 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-11 04:42 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-11 07:35 pm (UTC)I thought you were dead
Good Hunting is what you say
They were born to fly
Fight 'em til we can't
All this has happened before
They were taught to fight
Am I what you want?
The rest isn't worst a damn
They were made to love
Where are we going?
Maybe I want it upset
They were happy once
Where does that leave us?
Looks like it's just you and me
So say we all
Ships pass in the night
Nice to meet you, Lee Adama
Likewise, Kara Thrace
Destiny complete
So, what do you hear Starbuck?
Nothing but the rain
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Date: 2011-05-12 12:49 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-11 09:10 pm (UTC)Barely enough time to pray
Gods, don't let him die
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Date: 2011-05-12 12:50 am (UTC)IDEK...
Date: 2011-05-11 10:41 pm (UTC)Unless an evil robot
Has built one for you
Re: IDEK...
Date: 2011-05-12 12:29 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-12 03:54 am (UTC)Time is endlessness
Stretching out before her now
It is her destiny
Time is finite now
Life nothing without her here
His gun is cold. Heavy.