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Today, 'Shipper Nation, we're gonna' get ourselves all up in canon and FIX things, by the gods! One of my favorite abused literary devices is the introduction of a non-canon character that an author uses to say and do all the things they wish the series did. I've been guilty of it myself in other fandoms. A character you've never heard of suddenly has direct access to/hangs out with the major characters and has "that conversation" that someone really needed to have with them to set them straight/make them see the love they've been denying, etc.

Today, let's set Kara straight (Lee will get his talking-to tomorrow). Your mission, should you choose to accept it, is to imagine yourself a Mary Sue onboard Galactica. Wikipedia defines the literary device "Mary Sue" as follows:

A Mary Sue (sometimes just Sue), in fanfiction, is a fictional character with overly idealized and hackneyed mannerisms, lacking noteworthy flaws, and primarily functioning as a wish-fulfillment fantasy for the author or reader. Perhaps the single underlying feature of all characters described as "Mary Sues" is that they are too ostentatious for the audience's taste, or that the author seems to favor the character too highly. The author may seem to push how exceptional and wonderful the "Mary Sue" character is on his or her audience, sometimes leading the audience to dislike or even resent the character fairly quickly; such a character could be described as an "author's pet".

You are Lt. Busybody, callsign Matchmaker. You don't need to be a writer to know what to say to Kara. Hell, everyone can see she's ignoring her feelings for a certain CAG. Pretend you're friends with Kara- closer than she and Helo, maybe. What would you say to her if you two had some time alone? Of course, if you are a writer and want to make a whole scene out of this, I would never say no to Mary Sue comment!fic!

How's about some crack to start everyone off?

Date: 2011-01-24 02:36 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lotus79.livejournal.com
Ensign Sue: [running to catch up with Kara] Hey, Kaz!
Kara: [glowering] Unless you want to be pulling triple CAPs on the graveyard shift, Nugget, don't call me Kaz.
Ensign Sue: [shrugging] Whatever. You don't write the rosters anyway.
Kara: [dangerously]You're right there, the CAG does. But I'd be happy to put a word in his ear for you.
Ensign Sue: Oh, the CAG! Speaking of him...
Kara: [stares, wondering if this idiot will ever shut up.]
Ensign Sue: ...you think he's hot right?
Kara: [blinks at the sheer nerve of this girl] [coldly] What?!
Ensign Sue: [continues, oblivious] 'Cause anyone can see he's like totally into you.
Kara: [gives up on being intimidating since it's having no effect] Ensign, how old are you?
Ensign Sue: [blinks at the non sequitor] Thirty one, why?
Kara: [rolls eyes] No reason.
Ensign Sue: [thinks about it for a minute but gives up] Anyway, Cally told me that Helo told her that Lee told him he wants to make out with you. I totally think you should.
Kara: [Doesn't know what to say to that]
Ensign Sue: [oblivious to the axe that's about to fall on her] Anyway, I have CAP now, gotta go. Later, Kaz!
Kara: [Heads off to find the CAG and have Ensign Annoying demoted to waste recycling duties. And maybe make out a little too.]

Edited Date: 2011-01-24 02:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anamarya.livejournal.com
Cally told me that Helo told her that Lee told him and she says that she is 31. maybe 13.... but left me laughing, really laughing.

Date: 2011-01-24 05:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amaliak.livejournal.com
Oh look! A post about Razor!

Date: 2011-01-24 05:35 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] coffeesuperhero.livejournal.com
Aw, really? I love Kendra. :( I don't think she was a Mary Sue.

Date: 2011-01-24 05:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amaliak.livejournal.com
I love Kendra too, but she fits into Canon!Sue category, cemented by the fact that THEY NEVER MENTION HER AGAIN (what a waste, dude).

I still see most of Razor as one awesome fanfic.

Date: 2011-01-24 05:45 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] coffeesuperhero.livejournal.com
I don't see how that makes her a Sue, though? Wouldn't a Sue have had such a lasting impact on the characters in canon that they bring her up all the time?

Plus I think Kendra's an incredibly flawed character who had to make some really hard decisions at a terrible time, so I can't call her a Sue, even a "Canon!Sue," the definition of which I have always found somewhat troubling.

Date: 2011-01-24 06:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amaliak.livejournal.com
Well, Canon!Sue is defined commonly as (thx Wikipedia!):
A "canon Sue" may refer to a character whose canon portrayal itself is seen as a "Mary Sue", rather than a character who has been altered in fan fiction. Typically, this refers to a character accused of being overly idealized or having other traits traditionally associated with fan fiction "Mary Sues", such as being "special" by having a gratuitously tragic past, unrealistic skills, or a seeming inability for the character to do wrong.

I think Kendra, as much as I love her, falls into that description. Additionally, I call her that because she has no lasting impact on anything. She might not be OUR Mary Sue, but damn if she's not RDM's (or even David's).
- she was a nobody that Lee just pulled into being his XO (placing her in the inner circle of main characters), instead of people that were probably better qualified (like, Hoshi).
- she's the perfect foil for Kara.
- tragic past
- amazing skills

I see a Sue in Kendra. Yes, she's flawed etc, but she's almost too good to be true. Maybe I wouldn't think so had she had a longer arc.

Date: 2011-01-24 06:49 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] coffeesuperhero.livejournal.com
I don't think she really was a nobody, though: she'd worked for the Colonial Ministry of Defense and was apparently well-qualified enough to get a posting with Admiral Cain, pre-war. (And maybe that was nepotism, maybe it wasn't, but that kinda reminds me of Lee, a little.) She got demoted by Garner after Cain died, because he didn't like her. And yes, that certainly supports the "she has unrealistic skills," part of that definition, but I guess there's the rub, for me, with "Canon Sues" in general: I think that with nebulous standards like that, you can make an honest case for the Canon Sueness of every single character in any work. It troubles me particularly when it's applied to women, and more particularly when it's applied to female characters who excel, often (it seems to me) on the basis of their excellence, while their male counterparts suffer less-- and admittedly, that may be because their male counterparts often get the bigger storylines, and we as viewers get to know them better, so we learn about their flaws and their complexities and it makes it harder to make a case for Canon Stu.

Tragic past, amazing skills, ability to get away with things no one else should or could? That sounds a lot like Kara Thrace to me. It sounds a lot like Lee Adama. It sounds a lot like Kat. It sounds a lot like Chief, Boomer, Laura Roslin, Bill Adama. In the context of a post-apocalyptic show, everybody has a gratuitously tragic past. In the broader context of the sci-fi/fantasy genre, I think you find a lot of people with "amazing" or "unrealistic" skills, because that's part and parcel of the genre itself, to me.

I think that an example of a "Canon Sue," to me, is a lot like Justice Stewart's quip about obscenity: I know it when I see it. It's hard to pin it down; it's hard to get people to agree. But obviously it promotes good discussion, right? :)

Here's my thing with Kendra: I think Kendra's kind of a tragic figure. Kendra was a good soldier, but she made shitty decisions, she took orders that I would, objectively, say were not good and were morally repugnant, but she kept trying, right up until the bitter end. There's something so wonderfully, quintessentially human about that, to me, to struggle, to try, even though we know it's hopeless, even though we know that we're wrong, even though we know we've screwed up in ways that we may never be able to forgive ourselves for. There's value in that story, for me. Admittedly, I've got a million biases at play here, and I hope that this didn't sound mean! I think it's an interesting discussion, and one well-worth having.

Date: 2011-01-24 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amaliak.livejournal.com
Like I said, I think that if Kendra had been around longer and we'd been allowed to see more of her. I see her as a Sue for that reason. They didn't allow her to be anything else but a kick-ass girl. She works really well as a character in a movie, but in an established series, she comes off as a Sue to me and that's not fair.

There are examples of male Sues, but unfortunately they are rare.

I don't think you're being mean @ all! It's a good discussion to have, and I'm glad that we can have it!

*hugs*

Date: 2011-01-24 08:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callmeonetrack.livejournal.com
This has nothing to do with anything but:

"Colonial Ministry of Defense"

Seriously makes me think of our BSG/Hogwarts crossover universe. HEE

Carry on!

Date: 2011-01-24 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amaliak.livejournal.com
Hee. You're so right!

Date: 2011-01-24 10:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anastashial.livejournal.com
I agree she was well qualified for the role she was assigned, although possibly that could have had an element of nepotism in it. IIRC though she was assigned as Admiral Cain's Aide. Which in many ways is the equivalent of the Executive Assistant. Not necessarily a bad thing, but it could have explained her precipitous action of being the first one to fire on the Gideon. She really didn't have the combat experience, maybe even not the operational experience that Hoshi did. So for her to be picked by Lee as his XO, still leaves some problems for me, even though being a hard ass is part of the XO's role. If you want to see a real carrier XO in action check out the first episode of the PBS series I mentioned elsewhere in this thread. Someone took too long to report during a Man Overboard muster. We didn't even get to see what happened when the person was actually in front of him, but he still made Saul Tigh look way less fierce.

Date: 2011-01-24 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anastashial.livejournal.com
Oh there were actually three people who were late. The ship's XO got the enlisted guy who was ship's company. The two Lieutenants were attached to the Air Wing. They would have gotten their asses chewed by the CAG.

Date: 2011-01-24 05:48 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] coffeesuperhero.livejournal.com
Well, Garner disliked her and demoted her, though: she'd been of a higher rank before he took over. She had been working with the Ministry of Defense, pre-war, and she'd been assigned to Admiral Cain's ship, which I imagine was a pretty big deal. Plus, quick promotions are obviously not unusual in the BSG-verse during wartime.

Date: 2011-01-24 05:55 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] coffeesuperhero.livejournal.com
We just rewatched Razor the other day, so I think it's still fresh in my mind, lol. (And I stan for Kendra. I'll admit it.)

From what we saw of Pegasus, it looks like it was probably down to her and Hoshi for the job by that point, since Fiske and Garner were dead. It's not the best of the series, for sure, but I liked the look we got at Cain as a consequence of Lee picking Kendra.

Date: 2011-01-24 06:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anastashial.livejournal.com
Except I would consider that with crews the size of Glactica's and Pegasus' there were probably many more senior officers that just didn't get shown in the story.

Date: 2011-01-24 08:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callmeonetrack.livejournal.com
This is such a pet peeve of mine with the whole series. Especially Lee becoming CAG. A RESERVE OFFICER who just landed on the ship? Wasn't even from Galactica?

Seemed incredibly hard to believe that he would be the one to take on the CAG role because there was no one senior to him left. And even...on a battleship that size, wouldn't they have hundreds of pilots, hundreds of planes? I know a lot got wiped out in that first strike, but... HMMM.

Date: 2011-01-24 09:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kdbleu.livejournal.com
I think they do a better job of explaining Lee becoming CAG on Galactica because it's after many (most?) of the pilots have been lost in the attacks.

I also don't find it an unreasonable assumption that many commander tier officers had already been transferred off the Galactica prior to decommossioning. Although I'll be the first to admit that one is debatable and may just be how I justified Lee's becoming CAG instead of someone more senior already on Galactica.

I do find it odd that the Pegasus would have so few senior/comment level officers though.

Date: 2011-01-24 09:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callmeonetrack.livejournal.com
Early transferring off Galactica could help to answer the question as to why they didn't have more folks on hand. I wish we'd gotten a wee bit more info about where everyone was going to go after decommisssioning. It's an interesting thought.

I do still wonder though about the prioritizing of a reserves officer over a full time officer. I don't know, maybe that wouldn't matter at all (Anastashial can probably speak to that), but... it just struck me as odd.

Well and that on top of the fact that NEPOTISM AHOY. ;)

Date: 2011-01-24 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kdbleu.livejournal.com
Also, wasn't Lee being in the reserves retconned after the mini, like S2? So at the time of the mini he was a loner test pilot, not in the reserves and half out of the Fleet?

It's also entirely possible that being the CAG takes some other qualifications that not all senior officers would have, like being a pilot, maybe even specifically a fighter pilot, etc.

Or just being the commanders son and in love with the only other really great pilot left and...

Date: 2011-01-24 10:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anastashial.livejournal.com
My own reasoning for thinking Lee didn't go through an Academy was actually because he was a reservist. I've explained that a bit more in another of my posts in this thread. If he just gotten orders to test pilot school, or a billet as one, though there would be little chance that they would let him resign his commission any time soon.

Yes, a CAG would normally be an aviator, pilots definitely. I'm not sure if a Naval Flight Officer (not pilots, kind of the ECO role) would be eligible. I'm also not sure, but would think that those in the other aviation communities (attack and early warning, helo, and logistics) would also be eligible. In addition, the CO of a carrier is also an aviator, not a surface warfare type. Again I'm not sure if they serve on another type of smaller ship in an XO or CO role first, but I don't think so. It would take them out of aviation for too long.

Date: 2011-01-24 10:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anastashial.livejournal.com
You do make a point about the command tier officers, they're usually Department Heads, possibly already being gone. I can't say for certain how that works.

I would agree though that Pegasus not having a CAG much senior to a CF Captain is strange.

FYI, a USN Lieutenant is equal to a Marine/Air Force/Army Captain, and a USN Captain is equal to a Colonel in the other three services. So the CF having the ranks Lieutenant followed by Captain really threw a monkey wrentch into things for me because they are the same rank in US services.

Date: 2011-01-24 10:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anastashial.livejournal.com
It's not totally impossible it would be a reserve officer, but somewhat. I think what a lot of people don't realize that there are officers on full time active duty who were commissioned into the reserves. In the USN generally it's mostly those who went to the Academy that are commissioned as regular, and I think maybe ROTC scholarship students. If you plan on staying for a while you usually do whats called augmenting which switches your status from reserve to regular. I did that around the four year point. In Lee's case we know he was also planning to get out, although we don't know if Bill did.

A US carrier has between 60 and 90 aircraft with four fighter squadrons and four with other aircraft. The CAG owns all of them and is usually equal in rank to the carrier's CO. My understanding was that the battlestar was much larger. So I'd agree the number of pilots they showed probably would have managed one squadron. There were several squadron plaques in the bulkheads in the ready room, so I would think they would have multiple squadrons. They would most likely have been briefed by their own CO, who would be junior to the CAG. So it would have made sense to me for there to be a number of Majors and Lt. Colonels (who we never saw at all) in the Air Wing who might not all have been out flying.

I've been re-watching PBS' special Carrier (http://www.hulu.com/carrier), which is a multi-episode documentary about life on a USN carrier.

Date: 2011-01-24 05:32 pm (UTC)
ext_21969: (holy triad batman i've got full colors!)
From: [identity profile] coffeesuperhero.livejournal.com
"The thing is, God, sir," said Mockingbird, the newest of this round of nuggets, "the CAG told me to tell you that he needs to see you in the briefing room, immediately."

Kara slapped her Triad cards facedown on the table and glared up at the young pilot. "What the frak did you do to the CAG to land this punishment, nugget?"

"I shot my mouth off, sir," Mockingbird replied, and Kara raised an eyebrow. "Told him he might want to get the stick out of his ass before it did him a permanent injury."

Kara stared at the young woman for a long moment, then burst into loud, raucous laughter. "Insulting a superior asshole, huh, Mockingbird? Alright, just for that, I'll go. You play my hand. But if you lose my money," she warned, standing up and tucking her cigar into the corner of her mouth, "you're gonna have bigger problems than the CAG, you hear me?"

"Yes sir, God, sir," Mockingbird said, tossing off a neat salute before taking Kara's place at the Triad table. She waited until Kara was well down the hallway before glancing across the table at Helo. "Looks like Operation Frak the CAG is a go, sir," she said, and Helo grinned back at her.

"Let's just hope the other nuggets remember to lock 'em in the briefing room like we planned."
Edited Date: 2011-01-24 05:34 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-01-24 05:43 pm (UTC)
ext_21969: (kara + lee =  hijinks)
From: [identity profile] coffeesuperhero.livejournal.com
Helo is trying to win some money, okay. He picked today on the "When Will They Frak" betting pool, so he's trying to influence the situation.

Date: 2011-01-24 05:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anamarya.livejournal.com
didn't thought about that... nicely played Karl :P

Date: 2011-01-24 05:51 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] coffeesuperhero.livejournal.com
He's got a plan! His Cylon girlfriend is rubbing off on him. ;)

Date: 2011-01-24 05:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anamarya.livejournal.com
Helo-Helo-Helo.... not good man, you are corrupting the nuggets.

Date: 2011-01-24 05:51 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] coffeesuperhero.livejournal.com
I know, right? Shame on him. ;)

Date: 2011-01-24 06:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anamarya.livejournal.com
or maybe not. maybe the CAG is going to give him some free time after this :)

Date: 2011-01-24 05:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anastashial.livejournal.com
Very amusing. Poor Lee, he just gets no respect.

Date: 2011-01-24 05:52 pm (UTC)
ext_21969: (faster faster)
From: [identity profile] coffeesuperhero.livejournal.com
He's gonna be a very happy CAG after Kara's through with him, though. ;)

Date: 2011-01-24 06:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anastashial.livejournal.com
This is true.

Date: 2011-01-24 08:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callmeonetrack.livejournal.com
Hee. Very cute.

My incredibly uninspired answer to this thread was going to be:
"You mean we need to do more than just steal their clothes and lock em in a small space for a while?" ;)

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