DPP: Mary Sue to the Rescue- Part I
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Today, 'Shipper Nation, we're gonna' get ourselves all up in canon and FIX things, by the gods! One of my favorite abused literary devices is the introduction of a non-canon character that an author uses to say and do all the things they wish the series did. I've been guilty of it myself in other fandoms. A character you've never heard of suddenly has direct access to/hangs out with the major characters and has "that conversation" that someone really needed to have with them to set them straight/make them see the love they've been denying, etc.
Today, let's set Kara straight (Lee will get his talking-to tomorrow). Your mission, should you choose to accept it, is to imagine yourself a Mary Sue onboard Galactica. Wikipedia defines the literary device "Mary Sue" as follows:
Today, let's set Kara straight (Lee will get his talking-to tomorrow). Your mission, should you choose to accept it, is to imagine yourself a Mary Sue onboard Galactica. Wikipedia defines the literary device "Mary Sue" as follows:
A Mary Sue (sometimes just Sue), in fanfiction, is a fictional character with overly idealized and hackneyed mannerisms, lacking noteworthy flaws, and primarily functioning as a wish-fulfillment fantasy for the author or reader. Perhaps the single underlying feature of all characters described as "Mary Sues" is that they are too ostentatious for the audience's taste, or that the author seems to favor the character too highly. The author may seem to push how exceptional and wonderful the "Mary Sue" character is on his or her audience, sometimes leading the audience to dislike or even resent the character fairly quickly; such a character could be described as an "author's pet".
You are Lt. Busybody, callsign Matchmaker. You don't need to be a writer to know what to say to Kara. Hell, everyone can see she's ignoring her feelings for a certain CAG. Pretend you're friends with Kara- closer than she and Helo, maybe. What would you say to her if you two had some time alone? Of course, if you are a writer and want to make a whole scene out of this, I would never say no to Mary Sue comment!fic!
How's about some crack to start everyone off?
Date: 2011-01-24 02:36 pm (UTC)Kara: [glowering] Unless you want to be pulling triple CAPs on the graveyard shift, Nugget, don't call me Kaz.
Ensign Sue: [shrugging] Whatever. You don't write the rosters anyway.
Kara: [dangerously]You're right there, the CAG does. But I'd be happy to put a word in his ear for you.
Ensign Sue: Oh, the CAG! Speaking of him...
Kara: [stares, wondering if this idiot will ever shut up.]
Ensign Sue: ...you think he's hot right?
Kara: [blinks at the sheer nerve of this girl] [coldly] What?!
Ensign Sue: [continues, oblivious] 'Cause anyone can see he's like totally into you.
Kara: [gives up on being intimidating since it's having no effect] Ensign, how old are you?
Ensign Sue: [blinks at the non sequitor] Thirty one, why?
Kara: [rolls eyes] No reason.
Ensign Sue: [thinks about it for a minute but gives up] Anyway, Cally told me that Helo told her that Lee told him he wants to make out with you. I totally think you should.
Kara: [Doesn't know what to say to that]
Ensign Sue: [oblivious to the axe that's about to fall on her] Anyway, I have CAP now, gotta go. Later, Kaz!
Kara: [Heads off to find the CAG and have Ensign Annoying demoted to waste recycling duties. And maybe make out a little too.]
Re: How's about some crack to start everyone off?
Date: 2011-01-24 02:48 pm (UTC)Re: How's about some crack to start everyone off?
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Date: 2011-01-24 05:43 pm (UTC)I still see most of Razor as one awesome fanfic.
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Date: 2011-01-24 05:45 pm (UTC)Plus I think Kendra's an incredibly flawed character who had to make some really hard decisions at a terrible time, so I can't call her a Sue, even a "Canon!Sue," the definition of which I have always found somewhat troubling.
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Date: 2011-01-24 06:20 pm (UTC)A "canon Sue" may refer to a character whose canon portrayal itself is seen as a "Mary Sue", rather than a character who has been altered in fan fiction. Typically, this refers to a character accused of being overly idealized or having other traits traditionally associated with fan fiction "Mary Sues", such as being "special" by having a gratuitously tragic past, unrealistic skills, or a seeming inability for the character to do wrong.
I think Kendra, as much as I love her, falls into that description. Additionally, I call her that because she has no lasting impact on anything. She might not be OUR Mary Sue, but damn if she's not RDM's (or even David's).
- she was a nobody that Lee just pulled into being his XO (placing her in the inner circle of main characters), instead of people that were probably better qualified (like, Hoshi).
- she's the perfect foil for Kara.
- tragic past
- amazing skills
I see a Sue in Kendra. Yes, she's flawed etc, but she's almost too good to be true. Maybe I wouldn't think so had she had a longer arc.
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Date: 2011-01-24 06:49 pm (UTC)Tragic past, amazing skills, ability to get away with things no one else should or could? That sounds a lot like Kara Thrace to me. It sounds a lot like Lee Adama. It sounds a lot like Kat. It sounds a lot like Chief, Boomer, Laura Roslin, Bill Adama. In the context of a post-apocalyptic show, everybody has a gratuitously tragic past. In the broader context of the sci-fi/fantasy genre, I think you find a lot of people with "amazing" or "unrealistic" skills, because that's part and parcel of the genre itself, to me.
I think that an example of a "Canon Sue," to me, is a lot like Justice Stewart's quip about obscenity: I know it when I see it. It's hard to pin it down; it's hard to get people to agree. But obviously it promotes good discussion, right? :)
Here's my thing with Kendra: I think Kendra's kind of a tragic figure. Kendra was a good soldier, but she made shitty decisions, she took orders that I would, objectively, say were not good and were morally repugnant, but she kept trying, right up until the bitter end. There's something so wonderfully, quintessentially human about that, to me, to struggle, to try, even though we know it's hopeless, even though we know that we're wrong, even though we know we've screwed up in ways that we may never be able to forgive ourselves for. There's value in that story, for me. Admittedly, I've got a million biases at play here, and I hope that this didn't sound mean! I think it's an interesting discussion, and one well-worth having.
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Date: 2011-01-24 07:57 pm (UTC)There are examples of male Sues, but unfortunately they are rare.
I don't think you're being mean @ all! It's a good discussion to have, and I'm glad that we can have it!
*hugs*
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Date: 2011-01-24 08:40 pm (UTC)"Colonial Ministry of Defense"
Seriously makes me think of our BSG/Hogwarts crossover universe. HEE
Carry on!
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Date: 2011-01-24 05:55 pm (UTC)From what we saw of Pegasus, it looks like it was probably down to her and Hoshi for the job by that point, since Fiske and Garner were dead. It's not the best of the series, for sure, but I liked the look we got at Cain as a consequence of Lee picking Kendra.
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Date: 2011-01-24 08:44 pm (UTC)Seemed incredibly hard to believe that he would be the one to take on the CAG role because there was no one senior to him left. And even...on a battleship that size, wouldn't they have hundreds of pilots, hundreds of planes? I know a lot got wiped out in that first strike, but... HMMM.
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Date: 2011-01-24 09:42 pm (UTC)I also don't find it an unreasonable assumption that many commander tier officers had already been transferred off the Galactica prior to decommossioning. Although I'll be the first to admit that one is debatable and may just be how I justified Lee's becoming CAG instead of someone more senior already on Galactica.
I do find it odd that the Pegasus would have so few senior/comment level officers though.
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Date: 2011-01-24 09:48 pm (UTC)I do still wonder though about the prioritizing of a reserves officer over a full time officer. I don't know, maybe that wouldn't matter at all (Anastashial can probably speak to that), but... it just struck me as odd.
Well and that on top of the fact that NEPOTISM AHOY. ;)
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Date: 2011-01-24 09:54 pm (UTC)It's also entirely possible that being the CAG takes some other qualifications that not all senior officers would have, like being a pilot, maybe even specifically a fighter pilot, etc.
Or just being the commanders son and in love with the only other really great pilot left and...
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Date: 2011-01-24 10:28 pm (UTC)Yes, a CAG would normally be an aviator, pilots definitely. I'm not sure if a Naval Flight Officer (not pilots, kind of the ECO role) would be eligible. I'm also not sure, but would think that those in the other aviation communities (attack and early warning, helo, and logistics) would also be eligible. In addition, the CO of a carrier is also an aviator, not a surface warfare type. Again I'm not sure if they serve on another type of smaller ship in an XO or CO role first, but I don't think so. It would take them out of aviation for too long.
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Date: 2011-01-24 10:16 pm (UTC)I would agree though that Pegasus not having a CAG much senior to a CF Captain is strange.
FYI, a USN Lieutenant is equal to a Marine/Air Force/Army Captain, and a USN Captain is equal to a Colonel in the other three services. So the CF having the ranks Lieutenant followed by Captain really threw a monkey wrentch into things for me because they are the same rank in US services.
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Date: 2011-01-24 10:05 pm (UTC)A US carrier has between 60 and 90 aircraft with four fighter squadrons and four with other aircraft. The CAG owns all of them and is usually equal in rank to the carrier's CO. My understanding was that the battlestar was much larger. So I'd agree the number of pilots they showed probably would have managed one squadron. There were several squadron plaques in the bulkheads in the ready room, so I would think they would have multiple squadrons. They would most likely have been briefed by their own CO, who would be junior to the CAG. So it would have made sense to me for there to be a number of Majors and Lt. Colonels (who we never saw at all) in the Air Wing who might not all have been out flying.
I've been re-watching PBS' special Carrier (http://www.hulu.com/carrier), which is a multi-episode documentary about life on a USN carrier.
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Date: 2011-01-24 05:32 pm (UTC)Kara slapped her Triad cards facedown on the table and glared up at the young pilot. "What the frak did you do to the CAG to land this punishment, nugget?"
"I shot my mouth off, sir," Mockingbird replied, and Kara raised an eyebrow. "Told him he might want to get the stick out of his ass before it did him a permanent injury."
Kara stared at the young woman for a long moment, then burst into loud, raucous laughter. "Insulting a superior asshole, huh, Mockingbird? Alright, just for that, I'll go. You play my hand. But if you lose my money," she warned, standing up and tucking her cigar into the corner of her mouth, "you're gonna have bigger problems than the CAG, you hear me?"
"Yes sir, God, sir," Mockingbird said, tossing off a neat salute before taking Kara's place at the Triad table. She waited until Kara was well down the hallway before glancing across the table at Helo. "Looks like Operation Frak the CAG is a go, sir," she said, and Helo grinned back at her.
"Let's just hope the other nuggets remember to lock 'em in the briefing room like we planned."
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Date: 2011-01-24 08:46 pm (UTC)My incredibly uninspired answer to this thread was going to be:
"You mean we need to do more than just steal their clothes and lock em in a small space for a while?" ;)