Lol he has a line that is almost exactly that actually! I think the content of their conversation is okay probably but just maybe the timeline needs to be rejiggered so that instead of it all happening in one meeting/incident it unfolds a bit more gradually maybe. The only tricky thing there is if they keep meeting at night...then they're not missing each other as much because they're getting their fix so to speak. Hmmm...
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Date: 2012-07-01 12:02 am (UTC)