http://ninjamonkey73.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] ninjamonkey73.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] no_takebacks 2011-04-18 06:35 pm (UTC)

Re: Hold Me Down

Wow! This is very evocative. My favorite line:

Potential coils in her limbs, tingling until Kara thinks she’s going to burst into nothing, everything.

Great job!
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